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A perfect world! Really?

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One of your homework tasks was to brainstorm a list of things that would make a “perfect society.” Choose just one of the criteria from your list to discuss. Tell us why you consider this to be an essential quality of a “perfect society”. What aspect of our existing society has caused you to see a need for this attribute?

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“A perfect world! Really?”

  1. January 18th, 2013 at 4:55 PM      Reply jasmine woodar Says:

    A perfect word that I would like to discuss is about the world is damager. We are in a lot of danger now and days because , lots of hurtful things are happen to others. No telling how the world is going to be like in the future for us.


  2. January 18th, 2013 at 5:04 PM      Reply adrianna slaton Says:

    i think thata this is real good because brainstorming helps alot when you write. it gives you more ideas to go in to the story . it also helps when you are writing because it heps you learn how to write all differant kinds of stories .


    • January 22nd, 2013 at 2:01 PM      Reply Ms. Hayes Says:

      Adrianna, I appreciate the feedback. I am assuming that you are commenting on the benefits of blogging. In seventh grade, the focus is on argumentative writing more than narrative, but we still enjoy writing stories too.


  3. January 18th, 2013 at 5:17 PM      Reply Rachel Says:

    Hi. I am, an 6th grader in Ms. Roseberry’s class. All this week she was reviewing synonym, antomyns, prefix, and suffix. Also, she told us that we are going to start a book called “Diary of Anne Frank”. She was an Jewish 13 year old girl that was hiding from the Nazi.


    • January 22nd, 2013 at 1:57 PM      Reply Ms. Hayes Says:

      Rachel, you are a sixth grader in Ms. Roseberry’s class. Thanks for posting on my class blog! You will enjoy reading The Diary of Anne Frank. As you state, Anne Frank was a Jewish girl hiding from the Nazi during World War II. The prompt asked you to consider the attributes or qualities you would consider part of a “perfect world”. As you will see when you read the novel, Frank’s world was far from perfect.


  4. January 30th, 2013 at 2:33 PM      Reply zarrie Says:

    it is not a perfect world beacuse bad things is happening


  5. January 31st, 2013 at 9:28 AM      Reply poohbear13 Says:

    I believe that one of the most essential requirements for a perfect society is no guns. I believe that this is essential because if there are no weapons, then no one will get robbed or killed.


  6. January 31st, 2013 at 11:57 AM      Reply Jada Johnson Says:

    The 60% of the workforce should get a post graduate degree because I think the workforce or anybody need a post graduate to get more skills and proof that they actually finished college and go back to get another degree for more skills.


  7. January 31st, 2013 at 12:22 PM      Reply Sharron Ridley Says:

    I think the society will be better if there wasn’t that much violent in the world.


  8. January 31st, 2013 at 12:24 PM      Reply kierra cato Says:

    I think a perfect world would be if men stopped snatching little girls and killing and raped them. I also think that people should not have guns without insurance on it because everybody is getting killed and not just everybody little children getting killed.


  9. January 31st, 2013 at 1:59 PM      Reply alexis turner Says:

    I think what will make a better world if there wasn’t so many homeless people.kids are getting beat at home so i think if kids get the love they need they will have more respect. The kids negative outcome sometimes show this happens more at school than at home.


  10. January 31st, 2013 at 2:07 PM      Reply keishona Says:

    One thing that will make this world be a “perfect society” is gangs. I say gangs because there are more and more people getting killed these days because of gangs.


  11. January 31st, 2013 at 2:11 PM      Reply Mekayla Williams Says:

    I Think That If We Had More Security In Our Neighborhoods Our Homes Will Be More Peaceful. There Will Be No More Break Ins. The Reason I Say This Is Because We Don’t Need To Be Robbed For Just Being In Our Homes. It Brings Fear To The Children And Everybody Else. I Also Think We Need Neighbor Hood Watches.


  12. January 31st, 2013 at 2:13 PM      Reply frances Says:

    I think that if we stop getting abortions it would make the society better because us woman are getting pregnant from unprotected sex with a male and when we find out were pregnant we hurry to get rid of the baby.


  13. January 31st, 2013 at 2:13 PM      Reply shannon Says:

    One Thing That Would Make The World A “Perfect Society”Is That People Stop Dropping Out Of School.And For Children To Stop Killing Each Other Also For People To Stop Robbing People Because Thats The Main Reason People Dying Cause Other People Braking Into People House.And For People To Stop Texting While Driving And For People To Stop Dranking While Driving.


  14. January 31st, 2013 at 2:14 PM      Reply Briana Floyd Says:

    I think things that could help make this world a better place would be for people to change the way they solve their problems, now and days people solve their problems by taking it out on innocent people or an innocent child and even if it was an accident that accident and apology can’t bring the death of a family member or a loving friend back alive.


  15. January 31st, 2013 at 2:14 PM      Reply Dekhala Says:

    The biggest criteria to me is men raped kids. It’s the biggest criteria because little kids that’s not even old enough getting men snaching up and it could be anyone in my family, my friends, or even me.


  16. January 31st, 2013 at 2:20 PM      Reply AngelaHenry Says:

    I think that we can make a Perfect world if everyone just stop being cruel to eachother and bullying and beating your own color and if people had there education they will not being letting i streets look a hot mess with trash everywhere,And all come together !


  17. January 31st, 2013 at 2:33 PM      Reply Quaneisha Holder Says:

    One thing from my list is that we all should follow directions and I say that because now a days people breaking laws thinkin it’s right for them to do just anything


  18. January 31st, 2013 at 2:33 PM      Reply patricia Says:

    I think what will make a better world is… these others crazy people going in to there house in robing other people an, I also think what will make a better world is if all these older men stop raping these young girls.


  19. January 31st, 2013 at 2:38 PM      Reply Sidney Hardeman Says:

    I think that people shouldn’t have to get a post-graduate because some people aren’t going to go to college and graduate. Most people think it won’t be a good fit for them or they probably had something else in mind.


  20. January 31st, 2013 at 3:02 PM      Reply Sidney Hardeman Says:

    One thing that would make a good society is having a homeless shelter for homeless people. This would make a good society because this would take all the people of the streets who don’t have a home.


  21. February 4th, 2013 at 8:52 AM      Reply Rickayla Says:

    Well, what I think is a perfect world is when everyone in the world is just nice and peaceful. No one fighting, killing, and trying to harm anyone. Just everyone being nice showing kind hearts and love to everyone. No one is littering also everyone cleaning and taking care of the earth.


  22. February 20th, 2013 at 4:53 PM      Reply Llatrina Mccrary Says:

    I think that this is not a perfect world because if this was a perfect world noobody will be in jail, everybody would have a education.There would be more things in the world things that you could not think of. And there will not be no police in the world. That ie a perfect world.


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